Jenna
and Nathan had been friends for practically forever. They shared the same
birthday and had always celebrated together, their tenth birthday was no
different. Being ten, the two couldn’t really do much on their own so they did
what they always did, explore. Having little adventures and finding new secret
places was their favorite way to spend their time. Out of every place they had
ever found, a little pond on the outskirts of a lilac field was there absolute
favorite.
Jen and
Nath had stumbled upon the pond one day on the way home from school. They had
loads of homework so they figured they could stall by adventuring. When they
came to the field full of lilac, Nathan immediately wanted to turn around. He
claimed if any of the guys saw him there that he’d be made fun of for the rest
of his life. Jenna convinced him by batting her crystal blue eyes at him and twirling
her blonde ringlets. Jen always got what
she wanted. They began their adventure.
The
second they started their trek through the lilacs its like they entered a brand
new world. The sky that was dreary before was suddenly bright and sunny, the hot
thick air was suddenly cooler and delightful. A symphony of birds began
chirping and hundreds of butterflies began flying around. The mood lightened
and Nathan was no longer concerned about who saw him. The two began to run
through the field, screaming and laughing. After running for ages they stopped
abruptly, almost running straight into the pond. The pond was a clear blue
color, so clean, the same shade as Jens crystal blue eyes. Small gold fish swam
near the surface, not even phased by the two children peering down on them. The
pond was pretty yes, but nothing too special. Jen for some reason however was
convinced that it was magical. Nathan always believed she was crazy…until their
tenth birthday.
The day
had started off boring and they couldn’t think of anywhere to go except their little
pond. As the raced through the field like always, they started to notice there
were large footprints everywhere. Not large as in adult, large as in a non
human creature. At first they just blew it off, not wanting to ruin their
birthday by worrying about it. They began noticing bare patches in the lilac
field. That’s when the concern turned to anger. Who else knew about their
secret place? Who would ruin such a beautiful field? They sat by the pond while
pondering this. Nathan angrily threw a pebble into the pond. Less than three
seconds later Jen cried out. “NATHAN WHY WOULD YOU THROW A PEBBLE AT ME?”
Nathan of course had no idea what she was talking about, considering he threw
it directly into the pond. “Jen, I didn’t do anything. I threw it in the pond,
just like this.” He threw a second pebble in the bond, and this time, it came
back and hit HIM. The two were so confused and Nathan decided to try one more
time. He threw with all his might, but
the third rock came skipping back.
That’s when
things began to change. The July sky turned black, the pond began to bubble and
the lilacs began to wilt. The two ten year old ran as quick as they could to
get away. As the ran they heard a deep, raspy laugh coming from deep within the
pond. Pebbles whizzed past their heads and bodies, missing them by centimeters.
The two returned the next day to see what had happened, when they reached the
spot the field had always been, there was nothing. A parking lot was sitting
there, the pavement crumbling from old age. The two never saw the pond again
and never knew what actually happened that day.
What a mystery! I like the way you compare the water to the little girl's eyes and how she uses her powers of persuasion to lead her friend on adventures.
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